According to Aster, the first draft of was actually more arch and cartoonish and less emotional.

Source: https://www.buzzfeed.com/crystalro/beau-is-afraid-details-and-facts

"All registered and eligible Liberians will be allowed to access the first draft of the Voter Registration Roll for verification, inclusion, and objection to information on the PRR," it said.

Source: https://allafrica.com/stories/202305220305.html

As he was concluding his first draft of the dissent in the Scouts case, circulated to his colleagues on June 14, he referred to the “ancient roots” of unfavorable opinions about gay people.

Source: https://krdo.com/politics/cnn-us-politics/2023/05/18/behind-the-scenes-in-2000-when-supreme-court-liberals-thought-nazi-and-dred-scott-references-in-gay-rights-dissent-were-distracting/

Despite the years of waiting, it feels like a rough first draft that needs more work.

Source: https://kotaku.com/final-fantasy-tactics-arcadian-atlas-srpg-steam-review-1850692803

Even in cases when a first draft seems juiced up with nectar from the gods, I do not hit the submit button.

Source: https://mountainx.com/arts/mildred-kiconco-barya-celebrates-the-release-of-her-latest-poetry-collection/

Garma in 2022 — Yunupingu’s last, as we now know — was perfectly timed for Albanese to present his first draft of a constitutional amendment.

Source: https://insidestory.org.au/the-translator/

How much was changed is only known to and the first draft of the script that was finished mere weeks before Boseman died.

Source: https://bleedingcool.com/movies/letitia-wright-thinks-that-black-panther-3-is-already-in-the-works/

McFadden, the Tigers' first draft pick on the offensive side of the ball, started three seasons at offensive tackle for the Tigers, and the fifth-year senior was the ACC's blocker of the year in 2022.

Source: https://www.postandcourier.com/sports/clemson/clemsons-henry-mcfadden-allen-picked-in-fifth-round-of-nfl-draft/article_2c290c0a-e6aa-11ed-b582-0fb28c854ebe.html

Perhaps most important, however, is that the Brown report is a first draft, full of ambiguities, and it’s now out for consultation, which could be tortuous: There’s no guarantee a version of it will make Labour’s next manifesto.

Source: https://www.politico.eu/article/britain-take-back-control-deja-vu-brexit-keir-starmer-labour/?utm_source=RSS_Feed&utm_medium=RSS&utm_campaign=RSS_Syndication

The first draft of the “Deputy Zackari Parrish III Violence Prevention Act” failed in 2018.

Source: https://www.kunc.org/news/2023-03-27/red-flag-reckoning-reflects-the-sweeping-power-of-colorado-sheriffs

The Writers’ Guild of America went on strike on Tuesday morning, and reports that Gunn turned in the first draft of the script last week.

Source: https://411mania.com/movies/james-gunn-superman-legacy-first-draft-wga-strike/

Undoubtedly, these changes are part of why Robert Zemeckis' best movies, which underscores how much a movie's original concept can develop from first draft to principal photography.

Source: https://screenrant.com/back-future-original-script-changes-differences/

While working on the first draft, he brought in the famed comedy writer Bruce Vilanch, with whom he had worked at the Goodspeed on the musical “A Sign of the Times.”

Source: https://www.courant.com/2023/07/30/here-you-come-again-a-new-musical-featuring-dolly-parton-songs-reopens-the-goodspeeds-terris-theatre-in-chester/

Write that first draft, no matter how bad, Klivans paraphrases Lamott.

Source: https://www.centralmaine.com/2023/04/02/a-baker-and-retired-cookbook-writer-reflects-on-her-career/